The Official Writing Challenge
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Good essay!
02/26/17
Truth! -beautifully written
02/28/17
I am sure you will get a lot of "Amens" on this. Those of us baby boomers can remember when so many of those principals were alive and well. This would be a good devotional. Just some thoughts about some of the things you might get dinged on. I had a difficult time seeing the topic. That is me. Also, you came out of the shoot at full throttle. You need a good hook to get the reader excited about reading on. What you had to say is important. Put some life into it. Make us angry that things have deteriorated. Hope this helps. God bless. Great thoughts.