The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/17
This was well done, really made me think. Transitions and changes are always hard.

Hope it does well. Thanks for sharing.

God bless - Trudy
01/14/17
I felt the emotions surging within your words in this piece.

Well done.

God bless~
01/16/17
Lots of emotions used here. Explained quite clearly the turmoil we all go through when forced to leave our comfort zones. The ending of this transition still unclear?
I like your story poem. Its form was very uniform and served its purpose to unite it all. The opening word in each unit was telling with a foreboding feeling.
Very expressive.