The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your devotion. Your reminiscing took me back to my childhood too.

I'd urge you to be aware of how many times you repeat a word. I think I saw some form of procrastinate three times. I bet you'd be surprised at how many times you used other words too like coffee and school. Also okay should be written out or both letters capped--OK. When referring to a decade, you write it like this: '60s.

Those are little things though. I especially like devotions where the author shares tidbits of her own life. It makes it easy to relate and apply the lesson to my life. I think the Scriptures you picked were a nice match.
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