The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/16
This is...interesting. Hopefully someone who likes sci fi will read this and help you out here. The thing that tugs at me is the shots. But if they are animals, I suppose you would need a shot - but animals don't have a soul so wouldn't come to Jesus like this. But they are aliens... So this is why I don't read sci fi much, yes? :)
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