The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/16
I enjoyed this story. Had no particular red ink.
02/20/16
All the while I read this, I was envisioning my three year old grand-daughter! And the climbing the drawers - yeah I've worried about that too! Great job with this heart-warming slice of life creative writing.
with writing of this caliber, I do not expect you to linger in Level 1 for long. This was a completely engaging and authentic read, that put a smile on my face and made me laugh. It is a blessing to see God's purpose being lived out.
02/24/16
I think your story captured the indomitable spirit of a three-year-old. I'm glad your daughter grew into a teacher bringing music into the lives of others.
02/25/16
Congratulations! I too could just see my little ones in these same scenarios. Your writing evoked all those same emotions- to me that = well written.
02/25/16
Congratulations on your 3rd place entry in the Beginners Category, Karen.

I liked how you created such a vivid image of a three-year-old toddler.