The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/16
I really liked the interaction between the characters. My brother makes the best pies, and many people believe a woman must have made them, but truthfully most chefs are men.
02/15/16
You kept me happily reading. A great little story to follow and a fun ending. I was a tad confused with "teammates" wondering what the team was but just moved on with the story.
02/15/16
Great story and satisfying conclusion.
02/16/16
yes fun reading to the end.
I want to try it.
Enjoyed it and the 'word' delicious was not used but the feeling of delicious was from the first to the last paragraph.
02/17/16
Great job with the topic, well done!

Blessings~
02/18/16
Great job staying on topic. I enjoyed reading it and was wishing I had more interest in cooking. I'm thankful my husband enjoys cooking more than I do. Yea for the men!
Congratulations on ranking 9th in your level. Happy Dance!