The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
Beautiful story with heart!

God bless~
02/09/16
I thought this was a beautiful story about finding joy in whatever circumstances you are placed.

I was slightly confused at how of the opening paragraph and how it fit in with the rest of the story. I wasn't sure what Refine us meant.

I probably would have started right off the bat with the Guatemala people.

You described the people with such feeling. Great job.