The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a lot of good thought and advise in this article. You could make it into a much needed devotional. Many Christians have not yielded to Jesus as Lord and are only doing busywork for Jesus.

Contentment looks to Jesus as Lord and this brings daily rest.

Good thoughts. Nice writing.
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This is a lovely testimony. You make some great points. I can totally relate as I tend to be a control freak worrier too. It's a constant battle for me.

One suggestion to help your writing be even stronger is to be consistent with your voice. You start with we (using it like a universal you), then switch to I. Also, your opening lines are a bit confusing. What is the it you refer to? Your next line is an incomplete sentence. For example, you could fix it like this: Today's world is consistently saturated in constant noise. Whether it be it work, social media, school, or goals, we are inundated by the outside world.

Overall, I think you did a great job. You did a wonderful job of writing on topic in a fresh and interesting way. Your message is a good one, and many people will relate to itit. I'm eager to read more of your work.