The Official Writing Challenge
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When a person can put a twist at the end of an article, it shows good thought and skill.
11/06/15
Wow! I got a true chill when I read this story. This is very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
11/10/15
This piece shows some definite writing chops! I would like to have seen the story begin with some dialogue between Andrew and Pete that shows and connects us with what you tell in the first two paragraphs. The shadow and the twist at the end are quite effective. Good job.