The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/14
Interesting and fun read.

God bless~
11/16/14
I am surprised you could smell anything but dog on the trip up. Your building up a good description style well done
11/16/14
Interesting story! Love the dog details. I was unsure about the main character - whether it was a young boy or girl or older boy or girl - whether he was seated in the front seat or back seat of a car etc. Sometimes a reader can lose their focus on a story when unanswered questions are occupying their minds.
11/20/14
Congrats!
God bless~