The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Excellent job!

God bless~
I like your take on the topic, Cain and Abel is definitely relatable and I liked how your title fit as well. There was a definite rhythm to each verse.

Good job, thanks for sharing!
Nice use of bible examples to teach us a lesson.

We are all lost if we don't obey what God has to say.

An easy to read story in poem form. If this is your style, keep writing.
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