The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/14
Great poem highlighting so many of those in the halls of faith. Good rhyme and rhythm as well.
Beautiful poem! I love how you showed contrast of faith and fear within each stanza!!
02/15/14
Your poetry shows lots of potential. I hope you continue with your poetry and prose. I started writing poems that rhymed, and eventually found I could begin to write lyrically without rhyming - both kinds of poems have their value. It takes time and practice to become a seasoned poet or writer of prose - I'm glad we have lots of opportunity for experimentation and practice here at Faith Writers!
A nice poem to help us remember that being faithful to the end may not be pleasant but it is God's way.