The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this quite a bit.It's amazing how little things can change our whole outlook. Nice job.
Your first paragraph sounded just like our lives here in Latvia, especially the biting flies.
One small issue your sentence about watching the animals live their lives would have been better if you included the beginning of the next sentence. Then the second sentence could have continued with 'Yes.' That is probably as clear as mud.
Your writing is clearly gifted and inspired, good work.
06/12/11
Your positive outlook here is indeed grand!
06/14/11
A lovely sweet piece which I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks!