The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
This is cute!

While raising a child is definitely time consuming, I felt the theme was a bit lost with all the mentions of "minute." Would have been PERFECT for this week... Don't you hate that? :)

Good job with this one. I enjoyed it.
This is a precious poem about the precious parent-child relationship on
03/04/11
yes so many little gems hidden here good one.
03/09/11
I'm the mother of four and it is a time consuming adventure. So much in one day to do and the day rushes away from us. This would be great at a Mother/daughter program or something like it. Mom's need reminded they are helping to mold God's creation and it is a serious job and our time spent shaping the little people(the big ones too!!!!) he puts in our lives is a gift back to God too!