The Official Writing Challenge
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The writer talking directly to the reader does not always work - but this is nice. And reminding us of God risks rejection, over and over again, illustrates the strength of His love nicely. Ask a few less questions of the reader - 'Suppose for a moment...' instead of 'What if...?' Very nice premise though. God bless.
10/12/05
Good parallel structure, but it stumbles a bit in the paragraph that begins "...What if he was so aware..." (The young man didn't cut off part of himself.) With a few minor edits, a very nice devotional.
10/17/05
We are reminded of God's love in so many ways. The lover's act in picking the roses and removing the thorns brings to mind Christ's love for us.