The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Hehehe I've heard of "chitlins," but I think I'm glad I've never smelled them!

One minor grammar "boo boo..." "one could tell what their neighbors were having for dinner " You have "one" and "their," which don't agree in number. If you changed "one" to "people" that would work. :)

Good job with this one!
You did a great job of having my mouth water. Then I got to the chittlin part! I've never had the privilege and from your description, I think I'm okay with that. Good job.
08/06/10
South Carolina girl here, so I know what you mean.
Your writing is clear, descriptive, interesting and on topic. Good job.

Mona