The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
This is a nice analogy that stumbles a bit in the last sentence of your "hotel" paragraph. But it is a nice, thought-provoking devotional, well-written.
09/19/05
OKay! this is about a heavenly motel/hotel.
Good Story!
09/19/05
Great!
09/19/05
A very interesting article.
09/21/05
Hey, great analogy. Well-written and thought-provoking.
09/21/05
Very nice entry. I liked your descriptions.
God bless ya, littlelight
09/26/05
Pat, be encouraged. This was a good, simple message. The comparison was very clear and apart from that little sentence where you put "hotel's," (as someone has already pointed out) you presented it very well. Keep up the good work. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)