The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/09
I really, REALLY like this! Wonderful rhyme and meter, great images, and an excellent message.
12/09/09
Great poetic retelling of the story of Lazarus and the rich man.
I enjoyed the fresh insight you have given to a familar Bible story. Well done.
12/10/09
Daniel, Congratulations on "highly commended" with this wonderful story poem. If I had to choose just one favorite stanza it would be this, "Such honour great did he receive -- That righteous man and poor, -- Whose body knew no grave or tomb -- But blest for ever more." Your writing is truly wonderful!
12/16/09
Great job with the retelling of this familiar Bible story. Congratulations on this being highly commended.