The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
I really loved your unique description of the heavens and the orange moon. Also, the uniqueness of mankind. Great job. I drew a complete blank on orange!
I loved the descriptions here, and the way all of it pointed to God! They were wonderful word pictures. One suggestion for readability: keep your paragraphs a little smaller; I tended to get lost in words (but maybe that's just me!).
Your words made me want to reach out and touch the moon. I can always tell a felllow word painter and you did that for me.
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