The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem was most enjoyable! Read almost like a psalm. A suggestion: smooth out the rhythm and edit some of the phrases. You seem to prioritize the rhyming, rather than maintaining a good flow. Excellent praise to our Creator! Blessings.
11/23/09
What a beautiful poem! I love the words, the meter, and the rhyme. Well done!
11/23/09
Creative writing! I loved the words and descriptions you used to bring out praise to our Creator!

Keep up the good writing for His glory and honour!
11/23/09
I love your word pictures. It is so awesome when even nature praises our God!