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TITLE: Apple of Gods eye | Previous Challenge Entry
By Nicole Van Der Merwe
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So far you cannot see their end.
Fields of daisies blowing in the wind
Signs of new life everywhere
Tweet, tweet, twitter go the birds
As they see the sun emerge
Cattle graze in pastures green
The old dog twitches as he dreams
Chickens clucking round the yard
Horses ploughing fallow ground
The time to plant has just arrived
New life is given a chance to thrive
The whole earth is filled with Gods glory
Creation itself tells us the story
How fearfully and wonderfully are you made?
Jehovah formed and shaped you from mere clay
He breathed His breath into your shape
You certainly did not evolve from an ape
How blind are you son of man?
Do you not know you’re part of Gods plan?
All creation was wrought by the Fathers hand
Dominion given to us over sea and land
When man and woman disobeyed
Jesus in full the price has paid
He came to die
So once again we could be the apple of Gods eye.
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The meter could use some work, especially the last two lines.
You painted some great images here! Great job.
May I suggest?
"For each of us He came to die.
Forever the apple of God's eye."
You have some real talent here so keep writing!