The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
Amen, you hit the nail. There is nothing in the world that that we need to lug around, the Lord will provide all we need. God bless ya, littlelight
08/23/05
With just a tweak or two this would make a wonderful poem. If you have that bent, try keeping all the concepts and getting them into a bit of a groove. This was really good.
God Bless and Keep Writing!
08/24/05
Good message on the effects of guilt and shame which bog us down!lies - always! Thanks!
08/24/05
Some great truths here -it's so hard to forgive ourselves!
Short and powerful. This was well done. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.