The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
Wow! Your word pictures are vivid! I can almost feel a seed opening up under God's Light! Loved it!
07/31/09
This is very cleverly written; however, I found it a little distracting not to have it broken down into more paragaphs. Thank you for sharing.
08/03/09
This is awesome. I've felt like that little seed many times. Very good entry. Where you need to break the paragraphs up is in the dialogue. Excellent work and great devotional!
Wonderful devotional thoughts. Well done.
08/04/09
good story. I agree some more spaces and paragraphs would improve the read of the exellent monologue.
08/04/09
Liked the way you portrayed that even when it seems like we are dormant, God is still working on/with us.
Set aside the need for paragraph breaks...your devotional writing is quite good. Wonderful reminder that God ain't through with us yet.