The Official Writing Challenge
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I feel the passion behind your words, but most people will stop reading after the second paragraph unless they already agree with what your saying. Then what's the point in preaching to the choir? Try to give your readers a reason to read till the end.
07/16/09
I didn't see where this touched on the topic of "summer." Perhaps I missed something.