The Official Writing Challenge
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Hmmm, you have quite a bit going on here. Some great ideas and definitely on topic, but I felt as if you needed a particular focus, there was so much interesting information in here, I didn't know where to really start-even after I read it twice. I'd imagine you could do quite a bit with this here, if you thought to expand it or even make it into a two-part devotional. Great touch of humor woven in though. ^_^