The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/09
This is a well-written, interesting story.

One suggestion would be to perhaps open the piece with the conversation about going to India to draw the reader into the story.

Thank you for sharing this bit of history. I enjoyed it.
02/26/09
Hi Charlene. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Orphaned in India," actually did very well in the India Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 8th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=361615

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)