The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/08
Lovely free verse!

To bump your poetry up a notch, think about adding some figurative language--a metaphor or two, some imagery, some symbolism.

How blessed you are to have such a wonderful family!
Awesome! I even got teary eyed!! I really liked the poem. I love you and miss you! Christmas is coming! :)
Awesome! I even got teary eyed!! I really liked the poem. I love you and miss you! Christmas is coming! :)