The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/08
A wonderful, beautiful poem! I'm so sorry more haven't read and commented on it. Your rhyme is beautiful and your rhythm is good. It's a little rough in spots, but it has a good flow. I love the atmosphere of hope that you created.
11/12/08
Lovely poem. Good choice of words. Very nicely done.