The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/05
Thank you for sharing this. Good descriptions. Some of the sentences got a little long and I got a little lost in them. Shortening them up would give them more punch. Good luck with this piece.
02/02/05
very well written
thank you for sharing
Yeshua Bless
Some very good description and humor in this article. The scripture quote was a little long, I thought. I try to just hit the part of scripture that drives my point home, otherwise people tune out a little. Very well done.