The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
A sweet story--I'd love to read more about this experience!

Be careful of capitalization and punctuation...there were a few places that needed a quick edit.

Glad that your single's group was willing to take on this important ministry.
Nice testimony of the joy and blessings the CAROLLER receives! I'd like to see your examples fleshed out a bit - more descriptions of the people and their reactions and surroundings. Make your story come to life for the reader! Thank you for writing and submitting your experience - I enjoyed it. :) Cat
10/16/08
Thanks for sharing this story about making a differece in the lives of others.