The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Good progression in telling a difficult, but absorbing story.
08/29/08
Well-organized story with good opening and closure.
Very good. I liked how you tied in the beggining line with the ending line, the kiss.
Nicely told. You might reread it for the place where you capitalized "Himself".

That is a good example of a patience wife. Love covers over a multitude of sins.

Thanks for the reminder to love our husbands.

God Bless You.