The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/08
Oh, I want to go there! You described it so well!

Ordinarily, I'd suggest to someone with such long paragraphs that they break them up a bit, but these seemed to add to the mood of waiting, waiting, waiting...

Very lovely piece.
How enjoyable - sitting in the hide with you, out of the hot, burning sun, everyone quiet, moving only when necessary, just waiting and watching. And for such a reward. Sigh. How I long to walk again the 'ewige gebergtes, waar die krantze antwoord gee.' Your story is well written and evocative. God bless you.
08/31/08
These descriptions are beautiful - you truly put me there. Gorgeous.
09/01/08
Beautiful entry that made me really homesick :)
An excellent example of patience prevailing.

Great work! Fun to read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Oh, how beautiful! The descriptions captured the real life at the wild. This evoked lots of nostalgia for my childhood days when we coexisted with the wild animals. Good lesson on patience. Blessings!