The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of nice details in the introductions of the characters. Would like to have seen more dialog to show the specific interactions between the characters. Nice writing. :)
I need to remember this lesson, thanks for the reminder.

Enjoyed this slice of life.
05/17/08
The first two paragraphs in particular captivated my attention with the immediacy of the action through the picture of the morning routine and then the dialogue. I guess I had expected the rest of the piece to continue laying out the morning instead of stepping back to a summary explanation about Sherry and Bill. I think more dialogue, particularly showing Joanna talking back and forth to herself with God adding His infinity-cents' worth, would have made this piece sparkle all the more from your very strong beginning to your very solid ending.
05/17/08
I like the beginning paragraphs, too. The dialogue in those paragraphs are good. Good details in your story.