The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
"Interesting" A song in poem form. I enjoyed it even without the music, "smile". "Nicely Done"
06/07/05
I also would love to hear music to put to these words. A couple of lines seemed to flow a little less smoothly but the message comes across loud and clear.
Blesings, Lynda
06/09/05
I think when this is scored some of the pacing will iron out. Interesting and well done song/poem.
06/09/05
Definitely song material.Good job. :0)
06/10/05
A very nice poem/song telling the story of Jesus.