The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
Great writing and a perfect match for the topic! God bless :)
03/15/08
Great example. Keep writing.
03/17/08
Interesting! Good description of the setting. I could feel the heat. It would be great if everyone in both trucks accepted the Savior, but that seems very unrealistic. A little dialogue would help also.
This is very encouraging and so on topic.
Thank you for writing this.