The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
Ah, the divine appointments the Lord gives us and gives us His words. Great job of obeying Him and sharing God's love. God bless :)
Nice story. Could see a follow-up story on future conversations with Ellen, or Ellen visiting the church. Nice job with the topic. :)
Why is it so hard sometimes to obey the Spirit's promptings? Work is one of the places we have many opportunities to witness. Very good story based on the topic. I also would like to see some more of this story where Cindy and Ellen can have a real heart to heart and Cindy can talk about how the Lord has worked in her life. Well done.
03/17/08
How wonderful! Yes, I've seen God bring people across my path and it "just happens" that they are seeking answers. Isn't it a wonderful feeling to be used of the Lord?
Good use of dialogue. I would have liked a little more description of the break room, your co-workers, even your desk, something to make the reader relate more to the story.
Thank you for writing this.