The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/08
I like it. Nice use of the topic.
03/03/08
this is a really great story. I would have ended it w/ "my bro. Max." That would give it a greater punch. Also begin each person's dialog as a new sentence. Makes the story much easier to read. Again..
one of my favorites this week.
03/03/08
I like the differences in these two brothers! Very nice story telling and staying on topic!
Laury
03/04/08
CUTE story and I like the extreme differences in the brother's personalities - total opposites. Loved the ending too - God bless :)