The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/08
Ha, ha, ha!
I love poems, and this one is funny! I was tired too by the end of it. Try to keep the rhythm consistent for corresponding lines.
well written
This one is cute, especially the first two lines, which make a great opening. Keep up the good work!
Different approach to this topic. Good job. :)
Sometimes poetry ends up being all too serious, but you managed to keep this one lighthearted and fun. Thank you for sharing!
Congratulations on the Highly Commended.

Marlene