The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Hi Gary - looks like you are writing from your heart. Great work - Keep writing you have lots to share.
02/15/08
This is an interesting entry, considering it is a man's pov. Please have someone proofread for you. Mistakes take away from what you are trying to say. Keep on writing!
Laury
At one point, I had a really hard time getting over a girl I was with, and so as a guy, I can relate to this piece. A few grammatical errors, but otherwise very good. Thank you for sharing!
Emotions written clearly here. Nice job. :)