The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Very nice devotional. Good job reminding us to read The Book! You have some formatting problems. Be sure to preview your entry several times and correct it as needed. Also, please make sure you ask someone to proofread your work. It's so hard to catch our own mistakes. Keep on writing for God's glory!
Laury
02/10/08
Nice devotional piece - especially liked the last line. I suggest you have a challenge buddy or someone read your entries. You have some problems with grammar and punctuation, and I think it would be helpful if you brushed up on the rules. You have a lot of potential, and I encourage you to keep writing!