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02/02/08
Very good! I like what you've done here! It would be so much better if you put some dialogue into your writing, though. It would spice it up lots. You are well on your way to leaving beginners, I would say!
Laury
I LOVE IT> It's easy to get into, and be involved in.
02/02/08
This reads like the narration of a fine storyteller--I can just see her, surrounded by wide-eyed children.
This was fun to read! I see this a great children's story. Best wishes.
02/04/08
This DOES sound like the work of a storyteller - would make a great oral presentation for any age. Nice work!
02/05/08
You made the list for the Beginner Blessings this week! Congratulations! Here is the link: http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=17610
Very fun storytelling with a good message. :)