The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/08
Great ministry you have there. Kudos to you! But you left me feeling curious as to how one night could have destroyed the youth group so you had only ten left. This should have been a part of the story. Otherwise, good job.
01/21/08
Sometimes smaller is better!
I suggest that you avoid common phrases (rears his ugly head, mountain of tears) and create your own descriptive phrases.
Good job...keep writing.