The Official Writing Challenge
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12/17/07
I had never thought of the great commission starting with Abraham - this is very insightful, and absolutely fascinating to me (I am a Jew who found Christ). An excellent message that I am blessed to have read. Thank you for sharing.
12/17/07
This reads like a sermon--I could almost hear it being delivered that way!

The present tense in the second paragraph felt a little "off", as you were describing events of many years ago.

I like the exhortation at the end.
12/17/07
Good writing! You followed a consistant progression from Abraham to now, tying them all together.
Well done.