The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
You got the voices of the young women exactly right--and I like the tantalizing little hints dropped in the title and the last line.
12/03/07
You're so right! We rarely know at the time the memories that may be made in each little moment with our friends and loved ones. Very nice.
12/03/07
Lovely - enjoyed this read!