The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/07
Good job with the structure of this tidy little devotional.
11/25/07
I like how you described the different pulpits in each step of your life, although in the last paragraph, it would be better if your comparisons were similiar. Also, the title should have a question mark at the end.
Fifty-five verses of "Amazing Grace"? I hope that is an exageration. Good details. Keep writing.
11/25/07
Corrction: As I reread your story, I realized that you did use the same analogy (seeds), but calling the first sermons "vanilla" through off my thought pattern. Sorry, for not reading it more carefully.