The Official Writing Challenge
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You certainly have what makes an evangelist down. I particularly liked the first part. One suggestion might be to leave a blank space between paragraphs to make it a little easier to read. Nice thoughts. Thanks for sharing.
11/15/07
I too am a beginner but I can say I think this piece flowed well and was really powerful. Great writing!