The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
Wow! This kept me riveted throughout. Well written. Paragraph breaks would make it easier to read.
This piece takes my breath away. In America we don't hear that much about these kinds of realities. Great reminder of the very real dangers others face daily to follow the Christ we here in America take so for granted. Good writing, and Yes, a line between paragraphs would make it flow better. Blessings on your writing.
Very meaningful. Would like to have known the country in which this action takes place; would have helped understand the degree of danger.
Your story held me to the very end. It's extremely well written and flows along nicely. Your content made me remember how fortunate we are here.
I enjoyed this, and was able to stick to the story well. I too would have appreciated the paragraph break so that it would have not seemed overwhelming at first glance.
Shocking! Great descriptive writing! What a way to tell a story!