The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done... a well written easy read, with a great message!
Good job!
10/19/07
What a darling story! I enjoyed your title and your concluding statement.
10/20/07
What a lovely illustration!
10/20/07
Family Fellowship is God's heart for us - seeing that the Trinity enjoy each other. I'm glad they reached the ice cream shop. Thanks
Another story with a great analogy. Well written. How easily we can be distracted in our walk with God. Lovely story, keep up the great writing!