The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/07
Good point and good comparison between this life and the afterlife. If you broke up the writing into more paragraphs it may make it a little clearer. And I like the beginning of the last paragraph a lot - shifting to heaven makes a good almost ironic ending. If you shortened that last paragraph it may strengthen the punch behind your important message.
Great message about true worship, and how it's an image of Heavenly worship. Good job with this topic. :) Cat.