The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
I thought that the method of splitting the story into life and movie is very effective, especially due to the phrases that actually made the reader fearful. The introduction was also good, explaining your theme in a few sentences. However, I am not sure whether it is a good idea to indicate that the devil can only scare us, as he does have a great deal of real power.
08/31/07
Your storytelling was good. How well I recall a movie I once watched at night as I waited for my husband to come home from work. It made me afraid of the dark for months afterward, lol. Why people would choose to watch such things on a regular basis is beyond my understanding. But so glad you're a Christian. Keep the faith and may the good Lord bless & guide you in your writing career.
09/03/07
Nice build up. You drew the reader in to the sharing of your experience. Good flow and voice.
Yep! I can relate--too many nights reading Stephen King when no one else was home! Oh the imagaery we conjure in our minds. This was a great entry. Keep on writing!
Another great entry with suspense, but this one cleverly mixed in humor...and humility. We can't take things too seriously without the Lord's guidance or they wreak havoc in our minds. Watch the commas and other marks. Give it a good edit, and it invokes a powerful lesson.
09/07/07
Congratulations, Frank. Your entry has placed 12th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.